I feel that overall I need work in my speaking. I need to enunciate more and talk clearly. If I don’t do these things then I will not be successful in sounding confident and people will think that I don’t know what I am talking about. What I need to work on is staying and getting positive. I need to look not so depressed and I need to work on keeping my face and head still. I kind of twitch and move around. My content was very factual and could have been more detailed about what was the problem. I should have done more research and elaborated more on that. I felt that when I explained the system it was not too bad. I pointed out what its main purpose is, although I could have added more information on the pump and how it was built. I could not follow my story line. I was not clear on what the problem was and my thesis because I put the problem in with the thesis. Next time, I should make it separate and elaborate more on the problem. For example I could mention the result of the problem.
Self: I thought I did a good job on how I spoke i spoke very clearly and looked at the camera the whole time. I think i could’ve had a little more body language. But i do think i seemed confident. Also I stopped a little i can work on that next time. I had good content i said whats the problem. That aquaponics is the solution and how it works. For the “Why You” i could’ve talked a little more. And how our system is different from everybody else’s. I think my structure was good i had an introduction. Then i had my three questions and detailes. I think i could’ve added a little more on my conclusion restating some stuff.
I think that my video was the best to me out of all of my other ones. I thought that it was good because I felt like i knew the material and had an idea of what to do already. I think that in the beginning I kind drew in viewers because I said that we waste so much energy due to non sustainable resources. I think that my content was good too, because I gave some helpful information in the beginning, then explained a little bit about my aquaponic groups system.
I think that I did worse in this video. Having a laid out idea of what I was doing in the beginning made me feel more confident and ready to film. But then when I began attempting to film my pitch this time I felt like I was to structured and I kept forgetting the order or something that I was gonna say next. So then I had to look at my iPad and then got a little thrown off because I would lose my spot sometimes. I think that my information was all good though and I helped to have a good elevator pitch that could get someone into Aquaponics and our system in particular.
Speech- I am not that confident. I stumble a lot and forget what I’m talking about. I forget what I’m gonna say a lot. I have good eye contact. I move my Adam’s apple sometimes. I speak loudly through out the whole speech. I enunciate all my words.
Content- all my information is true. Everything I say is correct. I don’t have any information about aquaponics specifically, but I talk about how the world isn’t sustainable. I talk about our aquaponics kit.
Structure- I don’t have a good intro. I don’t interest people in what I’m gonna talk about. My body is okay it has good information and people care about what I’m talking about. I end it okay but it doesn’t really wrap up what I’m talking about. I could do a lot better.
I think that my speech part was okay. I think that I am slowly improving on confidence because I am better at a planned script. I thought that I did pretty good with using my hand motions but I might have used it a little too much. I was comfortable but I still need to work on the ups and downs in my voice so I don’t seem to be talking at one volume the entire time. My posture was okay. I think that I am going to try to stand up to get used to fish tank pitch, if we do another recording. I think that my content was filled with enough facts but not too much. I tried to relate as much as possible to people by giving examples. I think that I could have also talked more about other things that male our groups system unique and why it is better than other groups. I think that I talked a good amount about aquaponics in general. My structure went as I planned. I followed the points that I was going to talk about. I still need to work on my intro and ending but I think that I improved. I started with an interesting fact and tried to speak off of that I think that my conclusion could be a little more exciting.
I think I did horrible on this to be honest. It wasn’t my fault though I think. Matt and Isaiah were taking forever to record because they kept getting mixed up on their words. But for me I wasn’t breathing because I only had about 3 minutes left to speak which isn’t a lot of time. In my speech I needed air. I didn’t know when to stop in it so I couldn’t get air. And my voice sounded funny too me and sounded like I was confident. I kept messing up too this was just horrible, even my pitch was horrible, on my second evidence part I just said a sentence and stopped. I think that’s enough bottom line was it was horrible.
Posture was pretty good. Voice was good but stopped and stumbled a couple times. Looked quite confident, but stance and hands in pockets was sometimes awkward. Facial expressions where boring and weird, didn’t really change. Good energy. Fidgets a little and eye contact rarely fades off. Not much info on kit. Had good explaining information on aquaponics but nothing on the kit. Audience can learn but only little.Had good opening and closing statements but middle was only one point. Speech flows logically but not enough points.
Self: I thought I did a good job on how I spoke i spoke very clearly and looked at the camera the whole time. I think i could’ve had a little more body language. But i do think i seemed confident. Also I stopped a little i can work on that next time. I had good content i said whats the problem. That aquaponics is the solution and how it works. For the “Why You” i could’ve talked a little more. And how our system is different from everybody else’s. I think my structure was good i had an introduction. Then i had my three questions and detailes. I think i could’ve added a little more on my conclusion restating some stuff.
I think that my video was the best to me out of all of my other ones. I thought that it was good because I felt like i knew the material and had an idea of what to do already. I think that in the beginning I kind drew in viewers because I said that we waste so much energy due to non sustainable resources. I think that my content was good too, because I gave some helpful information in the beginning, then explained a little bit about my aquaponic groups system.
I think that I did worse in this video. Having a laid out idea of what I was doing in the beginning made me feel more confident and ready to film. But then when I began attempting to film my pitch this time I felt like I was to structured and I kept forgetting the order or something that I was gonna say next. So then I had to look at my iPad and then got a little thrown off because I would lose my spot sometimes. I think that my information was all good though and I helped to have a good elevator pitch that could get someone into Aquaponics and our system in particular.
Speech- I am not that confident. I stumble a lot and forget what I’m talking about. I forget what I’m gonna say a lot. I have good eye contact. I move my Adam’s apple sometimes. I speak loudly through out the whole speech. I enunciate all my words.
Content- all my information is true. Everything I say is correct. I don’t have any information about aquaponics specifically, but I talk about how the world isn’t sustainable. I talk about our aquaponics kit.
Structure- I don’t have a good intro. I don’t interest people in what I’m gonna talk about. My body is okay it has good information and people care about what I’m talking about. I end it okay but it doesn’t really wrap up what I’m talking about. I could do a lot better.
I think that my speech part was okay. I think that I am slowly improving on confidence because I am better at a planned script. I thought that I did pretty good with using my hand motions but I might have used it a little too much. I was comfortable but I still need to work on the ups and downs in my voice so I don’t seem to be talking at one volume the entire time. My posture was okay. I think that I am going to try to stand up to get used to fish tank pitch, if we do another recording. I think that my content was filled with enough facts but not too much. I tried to relate as much as possible to people by giving examples. I think that I could have also talked more about other things that male our groups system unique and why it is better than other groups. I think that I talked a good amount about aquaponics in general. My structure went as I planned. I followed the points that I was going to talk about. I still need to work on my intro and ending but I think that I improved. I started with an interesting fact and tried to speak off of that I think that my conclusion could be a little more exciting.
I think I did horrible on this to be honest. It wasn’t my fault though I think. Matt and Isaiah were taking forever to record because they kept getting mixed up on their words. But for me I wasn’t breathing because I only had about 3 minutes left to speak which isn’t a lot of time. In my speech I needed air. I didn’t know when to stop in it so I couldn’t get air. And my voice sounded funny too me and sounded like I was confident. I kept messing up too this was just horrible, even my pitch was horrible, on my second evidence part I just said a sentence and stopped. I think that’s enough bottom line was it was horrible.
Posture was pretty good. Voice was good but stopped and stumbled a couple times. Looked quite confident, but stance and hands in pockets was sometimes awkward. Facial expressions where boring and weird, didn’t really change. Good energy. Fidgets a little and eye contact rarely fades off. Not much info on kit. Had good explaining information on aquaponics but nothing on the kit. Audience can learn but only little.Had good opening and closing statements but middle was only one point. Speech flows logically but not enough points.