My speech about aquaponics seemed to be worse than my last two. It looks like I stutter a lot more and I paused for no reason in the middle of sentences. I stutter because I didn’t know what to say sometimes. My confidence was not good because I wasn’t really focused on the camera which is why I didn’t have eye contact with the camera sometimes. I should of spoke clearer and louder during my speech because it was sometimes hard to understand what I was saying. The information that I spoke about wasn’t really in depth because I would just state one sentence on something and then the next sentence about something else. Some facts that I said seemed confusing because I would speak about one thing and in the middle of it I would talk about something else. The content that I spoke about was mainly factual about aquaponics but I could of organized my thoughts better.
My Speech needs development;
I think this because my body movement was poor and my content was dry. I didn't use effective motions and gestures. My stature and posture was awkward and uncomfortable. My facial features were weird and usually boring. My eye contact was ok but I didn't connect with audience and didn't have energy. My content was lacking in the way that I didn't explain anything about aquaponics. I had obvious errors in speech and video. My voice and words didn't sound professional, prepared, or calm. Audience wouldn't have learnt much.
I think that I seemed a lot more confident in this video than other videos. I felt more confident and comfortable because I have talked about aquaponics many times. I think that my eye contact was okay but my focus could have been improved. I kept getting distracted and would laugh at certain things or look to the side. I think that my volume was okay but because I was far from the camera, it was a little softer than I had hoped for. I think my hand motions were appropriate with what I was saying. I think that laughing a little and smiling helped me to seem very positive with what I was saying. My content was mainly correct. I think that sometimes I should have explained a little more about one topic. I seemed to move on fairly fast after I said one thing. Sometimes I would also pause a little because I was confused wi what I was saying. I think that I did a pretty good job with talking about how our system works and what aquaponics is. If I could do this again, I would try to talk more about creating the system also.
I felt pretty confident when I spoke. I didn’t feel that nervous when I spoke which helped also with my content. I think one thing that I could have improved upon was speaking clearer and not moving so much. I thought my content was really good. I thought I did good job conveying what my job was. I wish I went into more detail about how we use social media.
I think that my speech hit close to mastery because even though I was regurgitating the first aquaponic related things that came to mind, i did so in quite a composed and even engaging way.I think that my body language and on foot movement was appropriate for the situation so i think that i am adept in this field. I think my content only hit target because I tended to just state the obvious with the information I brought up and it s content was on the same level as almost all the videos making it average or target.
Me- I was a kinda of quite and I tended to look of into the distance every so often and stuttered quite a bit. I added why aquaponics is so important and should be used.
Self-I think I did an okay job. I think I need a lot of development. In the beginning I seemed pretty confident but, towards the end I paused. I did not look at the camera the whole time. I thought I could’ve talked a little more on why Aquaponics will help the planet. Explaining water loss and oil pollution. I also think I could’ve talked about sustanibility. I do think I spoke clearly though and did not laugh.
I think that in my speech I lacked motivation and I made it seem really boring I do this a lot with out realizing it. I also took to much time thinking of what I am going to say. When you do this I makes it seem like you are not an expert. This was a problem because I did this a lot because I was distracted. I get distracted and I think that I just wanted to get it over with. I need to slow down and relax. I also need to make it seem like I am very interested.
I talked about being a contractor I think that my information was good i gave a broad over view of my job description. I had one sort of stubble in the middle but i just kept going.MAking these videos and coming up with things to talk about is getting way easier.
Speech: mostly in target area. Talked clearly, however stumbled occasionally as well as eyes wouldn’t settle. Fidgets every once in a while (mostly shifting weight). Hands are covered by sleeves. Content: information is correct and fairly organized. Something could probably be learned if person was uneducated on the topic.
From the last videos that were recorded, I feel that I made much improvement. I am speaking more comfortably and more confident. My enthusiasm seems to be rising because I don’t sound depressed like I used to. I need to improve on forgetting about the mistakes. I tend to smile or make motion when I mess up or don’t know what to say next. This video was kind of like a continuation of my last because I talked about aquaponics. I liked how in the last video I said what aquaponics is and I like what I also mentioned in this video. I explained what was most commonly asked. Next time, I could still up my enthusiasm to convince people into buying our product.
I think that my video could have used some work. At times I kind of stumbled with my words or didn’t pronounce something correct. As well I had a few awkward breaks where I was trying to process everything and gather something to say. Everything I said was factual and useful knowledge to the audience as well. But as I was watching the video back over I again, I noticed that I tend to kind of play with my hands when they are in my lap. So I could work on that, maybe that could be a possible way that I tend to release my stress.
I thought I did pretty good most of the time. But at times I would get stuck and studded because I didn’t know how to continue. Or sometimes I would stutter because I knew what word I was going to say but I couldn’t get the word out of my mouth.
My Speech needs development;
I think this because my body movement was poor and my content was dry. I didn't use effective motions and gestures. My stature and posture was awkward and uncomfortable. My facial features were weird and usually boring. My eye contact was ok but I didn't connect with audience and didn't have energy. My content was lacking in the way that I didn't explain anything about aquaponics. I had obvious errors in speech and video. My voice and words didn't sound professional, prepared, or calm. Audience wouldn't have learnt much.
I think that I seemed a lot more confident in this video than other videos. I felt more confident and comfortable because I have talked about aquaponics many times. I think that my eye contact was okay but my focus could have been improved. I kept getting distracted and would laugh at certain things or look to the side. I think that my volume was okay but because I was far from the camera, it was a little softer than I had hoped for. I think my hand motions were appropriate with what I was saying. I think that laughing a little and smiling helped me to seem very positive with what I was saying. My content was mainly correct. I think that sometimes I should have explained a little more about one topic. I seemed to move on fairly fast after I said one thing. Sometimes I would also pause a little because I was confused wi what I was saying. I think that I did a pretty good job with talking about how our system works and what aquaponics is. If I could do this again, I would try to talk more about creating the system also.
I felt pretty confident when I spoke. I didn’t feel that nervous when I spoke which helped also with my content. I think one thing that I could have improved upon was speaking clearer and not moving so much. I thought my content was really good. I thought I did good job conveying what my job was. I wish I went into more detail about how we use social media.
I think that my speech hit close to mastery because even though I was regurgitating the first aquaponic related things that came to mind, i did so in quite a composed and even engaging way.I think that my body language and on foot movement was appropriate for the situation so i think that i am adept in this field. I think my content only hit target because I tended to just state the obvious with the information I brought up and it s content was on the same level as almost all the videos making it average or target.
Me- I was a kinda of quite and I tended to look of into the distance every so often and stuttered quite a bit. I added why aquaponics is so important and should be used.
Self-I think I did an okay job. I think I need a lot of development. In the beginning I seemed pretty confident but, towards the end I paused. I did not look at the camera the whole time. I thought I could’ve talked a little more on why Aquaponics will help the planet. Explaining water loss and oil pollution. I also think I could’ve talked about sustanibility. I do think I spoke clearly though and did not laugh.
I think that in my speech I lacked motivation and I made it seem really boring I do this a lot with out realizing it. I also took to much time thinking of what I am going to say. When you do this I makes it seem like you are not an expert. This was a problem because I did this a lot because I was distracted. I get distracted and I think that I just wanted to get it over with. I need to slow down and relax. I also need to make it seem like I am very interested.
I talked about being a contractor I think that my information was good i gave a broad over view of my job description. I had one sort of stubble in the middle but i just kept going.MAking these videos and coming up with things to talk about is getting way easier.
Speech: mostly in target area. Talked clearly, however stumbled occasionally as well as eyes wouldn’t settle. Fidgets every once in a while (mostly shifting weight). Hands are covered by sleeves. Content: information is correct and fairly organized. Something could probably be learned if person was uneducated on the topic.
From the last videos that were recorded, I feel that I made much improvement. I am speaking more comfortably and more confident. My enthusiasm seems to be rising because I don’t sound depressed like I used to. I need to improve on forgetting about the mistakes. I tend to smile or make motion when I mess up or don’t know what to say next. This video was kind of like a continuation of my last because I talked about aquaponics. I liked how in the last video I said what aquaponics is and I like what I also mentioned in this video. I explained what was most commonly asked. Next time, I could still up my enthusiasm to convince people into buying our product.
I think that my video could have used some work. At times I kind of stumbled with my words or didn’t pronounce something correct. As well I had a few awkward breaks where I was trying to process everything and gather something to say. Everything I said was factual and useful knowledge to the audience as well. But as I was watching the video back over I again, I noticed that I tend to kind of play with my hands when they are in my lap. So I could work on that, maybe that could be a possible way that I tend to release my stress.
I thought I did pretty good most of the time. But at times I would get stuck and studded because I didn’t know how to continue. Or sometimes I would stutter because I knew what word I was going to say but I couldn’t get the word out of my mouth.